Here we are, at Part 8 of Devil's Advocate. The mystery has only gotten deeper - what is going on at New Hope Colony? What's Cameron and the inhabitants planning to do with the Christ bot once they get it out of the sysem? Why a did Dr. M&M risk life and ego to bring a Christ bot back to Earth? What does the Christ bot know? Where did it come from?
With all these questions and more, let's dive headfirst into the story, and rejoin Chloe back at New Hope Colony...
With all these questions and more, let's dive headfirst into the story, and rejoin Chloe back at New Hope Colony...
Chloe wanted
to believe that there was something amazing waiting for her. Instead, what she
found was very unsurprising. Tsion directed the two forks through the main door
and into the small community, Chloe following behind, as they walked into one
of the major atriums. It was only there that something she missed became
apparent to her, listening to them talk: there was no way they’d tell two
females anything. There was a barely masked disdain towards both forks, and
Chloe knew that both forks had to be aware of it. They were making small talk –
Tsion seemed obsessed with the fact that the Rapture had happened, and that
soon, God would be coming back. The Tribulation, he said, was now. As he
talked, Chloe’s attention wandered, and she decided to leave the forks to their
own business. She’d tagged them in her AR, so there was no way that they would
get away from her again.
She broke from where Tsion and
the forks were at, wishing that she could listen in as she did so. It was
possible to hear what others were hearing and see what others were seeing in
real time, but they have the proper mesh inserts, first. The forks didn’t have any mesh inserts.
As she moved slowly through the
darkened corridors, she let her eyes wander, taking in all of the various
nooks, crannies, and alcoves that dotted the hallways of this very old station.
This uncomfortably old station.
Azure: [I’d be nervous about living in this station. It doesn’t
look like it’s been taken good care of.]
Chloe: [I’m getting the feeling that it’s faith and faith alone
that holds this place together.]
She stopped beside a complex
network of pipework and cables, frowning. There were actual splits in the wall,
with condensation running between them. She ran her fingers over the dirty
wall, brushing off the dirt and revealing something. Curiosity took her, and
she started dusting the wall off, revealing a mural with rotating red and white
stripes. She moved to the left, and revealed a blue box with white stars.
Chloe: [It’s American.]
Azure: [So it is. I ran some searches before we arrived – Americans
didn’t have any colonies this far south. At least, none on record.]
Chloe continued to clean the
wall off with her hand, avoiding the splits in the wall. As she did so,
something else became readily apparent: the lines weren’t even or straight. It
was almost like it’d been hastily painted there.
Chloe: [That’s because this isn’t
and American colony. But someone sure wants to think it is.]
Azure: [One of the core tenets of American Evangelicalism is
American Exceptionalism.]
Chloe: [Which is?]
Azure: [Exactly what it sounds like: the belief that America was an
exceptional nation, and that God had personally appointed its existence and
thus, protected it and ensured its prosperity. The “city upon a hill,” from
Matthew 5:14.]
Chloe: [So they’re trying to recreate America out here in this
little slice of heaven, neck deep in the Barsoomdocks.]
Azure: [Barsoomdocks?]
Chloe: [Boondocks – are you familiar with the term? It’s a play on
that. You know, Mars, Barsoom, and boon? Yeah… okay, so it’s not all that
clever. Anyway, this was put here for a reason. Perhaps because whoever put
this here thought they could claim it in the name of America.]
Azure: [Possibly.]
Chloe stood up, looking at the
flag. Part of her was beginning to think that she was dwelling too long on
things that didn’t matter; she pulled her attention away from the flag and
continued down the corridor, spotting a camera and hacking into it, erasing
what little evidence of here there was in real time. The presence of the
American flag only served to confirm what she’d initially suspected – the
particular brand of Christianity that they seemed to practice was almost
exclusively unique to America anyway (a few African nations, and the
Commonwealth nations, notwithstanding), but it was nice to have some
confirmation. She approached the end of a corridor, from which she heard a loud
scream. It startled her at first – for a minute, she thought it was one of the
forks. But the voice didn’t belong to either – it belonged to a man. She took
several steps back, and braced herself against the edge of the corner. It was only
when she looked back that Chloe realized she’d walked right through an optical
illusion; it was set up so that it looked like there was a wall there when
really, the hallway was left wide open. She noticed it easily.
A flat, however, would not.
She peered around the corner,
looking through the door. An armless synth, missing the entire lower part of
its body, was connected to some kind of machine. There were a few men in black
standing around, and two doctors.
It looked like the Christbot.
Chloe (secure connection, ++Azure++): [We’re going to try and crack
their connection. I want to hear what they’re saying.]
She had to be extremely careful.
One mistake would alert them to her presence, and as of yet, they didn’t seem
to have noticed her. She swallowed and went about gently hacking into the AR of
the closest one; AR hacking wasn’t hard if one knew what they were doing. But
Chloe wasn’t that familiar with Infosec and its practices. Still, she had Azure
to guide her; and piece by piece, they made progress, until finally Chloe had
managed to slip past him and his muse, and was in his AR.
Javier: [It won’t work in the synth. Asyncs don’t work in synths.]
Rezan: [I know that. I don’t want it to work. We don’t want it to work, Javier. That’d be bad if we had a
functioning async.]
Nomi: [I’ll tell this ‘Wong’ guy to crank up the pressure on it.]
Chloe was trying to make herself
as unknown as possible. However, she was keeping up Javier’s feed, and noticed
more than a few things she didn’t recognize.
Chloe (secure connection, ++Azure++): [Ozma? Who the fuck is Ozma?]
Azure (secure connection, ++Chloe++): [I don’t know, Chloe.]
She was trying to identify the
different figures. Rezan was looking in her general direction, but hidden
behind a black mask. Javier had his back turned to her, while Nomi was standing
next to Reza, holding his gun to the head of a very Chinese looking flat.
“But… it’s…” Wong stammered.
“You’re mistaking me for giving
a fuck. Do what I tell you, you stupid fucking flat. Or I’ll blow your fucking
brains out.”
Nomi sounded like a woman, but
that didn’t mean anything. She couldn’t tell anything about gender; it was all
hidden under the armor. The gun, and the tone, said all that Chloe needed to
know about the person under it.
She waited to see what would
happen. The Chinese flat, stammering in protest, looked back at the device and
started messing with it some more, the synth screaming loudly again.
Rezan: [It’ll tell us what we want to know.]
Javier: [That or we’ll just keep it up…]
He stopped and looked over his
shoulder; Chloe abandoning the hack.
She’d been discovered.
There wasn’t any warning; there
wasn’t any kind of shout. There was one gun, and the sound of a head exploding,
and then a spray of gunfire in the hallway. The bullets slammed into the wall
and splintered as she fumbled with her firearm. They weren’t moving, but they’d
stopped firing.
When the gunfire stopped, it was
only because a grenade came around the corner. She kicked it back and turned
back into the main hallway, the grenade going off as two of the Ozma agents
spun from around the corner and opened fire. She was behind the network of
pipes; it gave her enough cover to return fire, forcing the agents back. Her
mind was racing and her hands trembling; she looked back over her shoulder and
closed her eyes, reaching out with something deep inside of her. It seemed to
almost guide the bullet, slamming into the face shield of the Ozma agent and
boring through the armor itself. The agent went backwards as Chloe spun back
into cover, trying to figure out what had just happened.
The others two fell backwards as
Chloe attempted to recreate it. She leaned around and pulled the trigger,
putting the bullet through the shoulder of an Ozma agent as the last one took a
shot at her. The bullet struck the pipes but missed; with their shot taken,
Chloe planted several rounds into the stomach, chest, and face, hoping that
something would hit. The agent went backwards as Chloe put another round
through the skull; dropping the agent cold.
There was still one left.
She raced beside the wall that
she’d been pinned against, her heart thundering against her chest. She leaned
around the corner, and for a few tense seconds, expected return shots. When she
didn’t get any, she eased her way into the room, stopping and looking at the
floor. The last Ozma agent had bled out quickly from the shoulder shot and lay
on the ground dead. The Chinese looking flat had a massive hole on the side of
his head, and the synth looked like it’d been shot twice in the face.
She looked over her shoulder at
the last two Ozma agents, who lay on the ground dead.
Just to make sure, however, she
walked over and for each in kind put a round through their head, making sure that
they were gone. Once she’d killed them, she had to fight the nausea of trying
to fish out the cortical stacks – only to find that they didn’t have any.
She shook the blood off of her
hands.
“Forks.”
Azure: [More than likely.]
There was something that did have a cortical stack, however.
She walked over to the partially
dissected Christbot, pulling out the synth’s cortical stack. It removed with a
simple “snap,” and she was rolling it around in her hands.
“I saved Jesus.”
Azure: [Is that a first?]
Chloe: [Possibly.]
She tucked the cortical stack
away. Dragging the last two Ozma agents into the back room with the rest of the
bodies and shutting the door back, barring it closed.
Of course, that was only after she’d collected their weapons.
Chloe: [They said it was an async. I thought people like me
couldn’t be sleeved inside of synths.]
Azure: [That’s what I thought, too.]
She’d been told by Antares, when
he explained what an async was – that is, a biological, human hypercomptuer –
that they couldn’t be sleeved in non-biological brains. Now that she’d seen it was possible, she was beginning to
wonder why it was a bad idea. And even more than that, she was in possession of
a strong urge to not find out.
In the back of her head,
something was telling her she’d probably done this async a favor by killing it.
With the scene of the fight
mostly taken care of, she ducked back into the hallway, still mostly invisible,
and determined to see where this hallway went. It was obviously kept separate
from the rest of the building colony for a reason, and while this might’ve been
that reason, she still wanted to hold off and see.
Further down the corridor, it
took a sharp turn, and she found herself in another network of empty or otherwise
abandoned tunnels. However, she could hear a whole multitude of voices through
the ventilation shafts that crisscrossed overhead.
Her XP automatically kicked into
“record” mode. She would go back and review it after she got done, but one
thing caught her attention: it sounded like Zion talking with Cameron.
She triangulated the vent that
the noise was coming from, and moved towards it, jumping on the vent and
hanging there, as she pressed her ear against it to hear better.
“The Creator wants us to move
the Savior as quickly out as possible. It will only be a matter of time, he
told me, before one of the agencies that this planet is crawling with catches
up with us,” she heard Zion say.
“The only reason they’re even
after us,” Cameron said, “Is because we hired the wrong person to get Him away
from Earth.”
It sounded exactly like Cameron,
but she immediately noticed that the speech patterns didn’t match up. The tone
and pitch matched perfectly. The speech and emphasis did not, and she would
never have caught that if her AR and her kinesics didn’t point it out to her.
“Regardless what it is, the
Creator knows that we need to get away from Mars. We need to get the Savor away
from the solar system – Satan is at work here, and if we let the Antichrist get
the upper hand now, then who only knows what will happen.”
“The antichrist won’t get the
upper hand,” Cameron said. “And at the end of the day, all that we have to
really worry about is how we’re going to laugh at the sinners burning in Hell.”
That was a decidedly un-Cameron thing to say.
Except for the fact that it wasn’t. She replayed the XP that ZIra
gave her of Calix, right before he shot her.
Azure: [My God.]
Chloe nodded, out of habit more
than anything. The tone and pitch were obviously off, being a synth, but the
speech and emphasis matched perfectly. When overlapped with her own memories of
dealing with the Cameron fork before she killed it, neither Calix nor this
Cameron matched.
Chloe: [Cameron and Calix were two different people.]
Azure: [But… Calix said that the flat was his fork.]
Chloe: [That’s always possible. But remember what Zira told us?
Forking is an inexact science. It’s possible to permanently alter the memories
and change certain aspects of the fork’s personality. If you can do it on accident, what’s to stop someone from
doing it on purpose?]
Azure: [But… why?]
Chloe continued listening.
“Of course; and what are we
going to do with the two new comers? They’re both righteous, neither have any
transhuman advances, and neither act like a transhuman in anyway.”
“If they’re not transhumans,
then they’re not. I’ll catch up with them later, but for the moment, I have
more important things I’m working on, Zion. You just make sure that you,
Rayford, Amanda and my wife are able to get the Savior out of here, and to the
Pandora gate. Once he’s on the other side of the gate, we’ll move from there.”
“And the Creator?”
“Trust me. I know what the
Creator is after – he speaks with me. I know.”
“Very well, Cameron – since you
seem to know what you’re talking about, I’ll be sure to share with Rayford and
his family that we’ll be working to move the Savior. Are we leaving the other
two behind?”
“I’m going meet with them first.
I’ll determine it from there.”
Chloe was feeling very uneasy.
She looked over her shoulder right as, on the other side of a glass barrier,
her two forks appeared – lead by Zion.
Chloe: [What the fuck…]
Azure: [There’s more than one. Chloe, there’s more than one of
them.]
Chloe felt a chill realization.
Chloe: [What if… Azure, what if this whole place is populated by
nothing but forks? What if all of
these flats, all of these people, are nothing but forks pruned from the same
person or few people?]
Azure: [It would explain why Zion used the word ‘creator.’]
Chloe gently landed on the
floor, feeling rather ill and cold. She hadn’t gotten that feeling before this,
but now… now something was deeply unsettling her about this place.
She fumbled in her pocket and
ducked in the shadows, looking at the cortical stack of the synth.
“You know something,” she said.
“And I’m going to find out what.”
Azure: [Chloe. What if Zion has mesh inserts? That would explain
why he can communicate with himself.]
Chloe: [But… I didn’t think flats could have mesh inserts. And if
he does and if this place is nothing but forks… it’s not bioconservative at
all.]
She looked over her shoulder, as
Zion lead the two of them down the hallway, continuing to talk with them.
Chloe, deciding that she’d left her forks alone long enough, raced towards the
door beside the glass window and pushed it open, stepping into the hallway
where she could hear Zion and her fork. As she did so, she looked over at the
wall and noticed it appeared to be solid concrete – it was a one-way window.
What was this, some kind of fun
house?
The two forks continued walking
and listening to Zion. Chloe followed, watching as they reached the end of the
hallway.
“And in here,” Zion said, “is a
pure validation of our faith.”
He opened the door as Chloe
caught up with them, Zion gesturing inside of the room as a man with a long
brown beard turned around, wearing robes and long, light brown hair with blue
eyes looked back at them.
“God?” her fork, Zelda, asked.
The man smiled, as Chloe watched
on, horrified.
No, this was no God.
There was something else -
something horrifically unnatural behind those beautiful blue eyes – something
malicious, alien, and almost evil.
“Our Lord and Savior, Jesus
Christ.”
but they have the proper mesh inserts, first.
ReplyDeleteHad to have.
this isn’t and American colony.
An.
what little evidence of here there was
Her.
Dragging the last two Ozma agents into the back room with the rest of the bodies and shutting the door back, barring it closed.
"She dragged the last two Ozma agents into the back room with the rest of the bodies and shut the door, barring it closed."
hypercomptuer
Hypercomputer.
("Add to Dictionary" is your friend, as long as you make sure the words are correctly spelled when you add them.)
it sounded like Zion talking with Cameron.
Tsion.
catches up with us,” she heard Zion say.
And here.
things I’m working on, Zion.
You are going to spell it Tsion, aren't you? You did the first three times, and given the Left Behind context that's what it should be.
Is because we hired
This is resuming the sentence, so "is" shouldn't be capitalised.
We need to get the Savor away
Savior.
if we let the Antichrist get the upper hand [...] The antichrist won’t get the upper hand
Inconsistent capitalisation. I think the capitalised one is the one you want.
the XP that ZIra gave her
Zira.
with the two new comers?
Newcomers shouldn't have a space.
act like a transhuman in anyway
In this context, "any way" is two words.
I’m going meet with them first.
To meet.
he looked over her shoulder right as, on the other side of a glass barrier, her two forks appeared – lead by Zion.
Led.
as Zion lead the two of them
Ditto.