Alright, here's Part 7 in the continuing saga of Chloe and Zira.
Last time around Zira concocted a scheme that would either get them killed or get them into New Hope Colony. And by "them" I mean Chloe, and by "killed or get into the colony" I likely mean both. Today picks up with Zira following a few leads, and answering a few questions while Chloe infiltrates the New Hope Colony.
Last time around Zira concocted a scheme that would either get them killed or get them into New Hope Colony. And by "them" I mean Chloe, and by "killed or get into the colony" I likely mean both. Today picks up with Zira following a few leads, and answering a few questions while Chloe infiltrates the New Hope Colony.
Zira sat
outside, watching the lights flicker on the street signs. Chloe was by herself,
left to babysit two forks inside of a hidden fundamentalist compound. While she
did that, Zira, half a world way, had managed to track down information
relating to Cameron; a ping back on one of the dozen or so cameras scattered
throughout the city of Noctis-Qiangjiao. He apparently wasn’t one for changing
the bodies of his flats; he had a particular morph that he liked and he kept
it.
The fact that he could be so
intelligent and so stupid at the same time was staggering for her.
She waited by the door, looking
out through the window of the car. Earlier in the day she’d made her rounds
among the pleasure pods to see if they knew anything about that particular pod,
but they didn’t. She didn’t expect them too, but it never hurt to check. In
fact, it felt rather good.
Zira rubbed her temple, waiting
for him. He wasn’t far from here; a flat in this neighborhood stood out. Especially
considering most of the inhabitants of this neighborhood were synths and pods.
She sat back, closing her eyes, when out of the corner of her eye, she spotted
a familiar flat.
Drawing her gun, she stepped out
from the vehicle, walking after him. He was confident, walking like a peacock
with his chest and chin stuck out. At least, until he looked behind him and
realized that she was following him.
He wheeled around and made a
break for it. She followed, racing after him. In an attempt to shake he,
Cameron jumped into a dense crowd of people, shoving them aside as Zira followed,
the two pushing their way into the densely populate downtown region of the
city.
She didn’t attempt to take a
shot yet. She kept behind him, though, having painted him in her AR. There
wasn’t much of a chance of her losing him, but that didn’t keep her from
worrying about it anyway. He made a leap of faith and plowed into a dense
crowd, Zira stopping on the other side. Frowning, she brought up a map and
accessed all of the individual cameras and real-time feeds from the different
surveillance and sousveillance points in the city and ducked around the crowd,
keeping her eye on Cameron as he continued to run.
She would catch him when he came
out through a nearby alleyway.
Or so she thought, anyway.
She almost stumbled to a stop;
however, when she noticed several transhumans she didn’t recognize drawing guns
instead and following him.
Apparently, she wasn’t the only
one who wanted him.
She ducked into the alleyway –
hopefully they couldn’t see her. She wasn’t exactly chasing after him, but she
knew that if she4 could see them, it was likely that they could see her. And if
they could see her, then they could figure out what it was she was doing.
Cameron bolted into the open
alleyway, looking over his shoulder at the men chasing after him. He ran right
up to Zira, who grabbed him as she walked forward, and then pulled him into a
nearby doorway, slamming the door shut behind him.
His yells were muffled by her
hand over his mouth.
“Shut it. You saw the men in
black behind you. If you don’t want them following us, then you’d best keep
your mouth shut.”
Zira pulled him into a nearby
room, and threw him against the ground, training a gun on him.
“Fork or real thing?”
“Like you’d know,” he sputtered
angrily.
She held her gun up and put a
bullet through his brain.
“We’ll find out. Oh. And Chloe
sends her regards.”
Simulspace was something that
she hadn’t quite grown accustomed to. Sure, she had some dealings in it – that
was ultimately how she and Chloe managed to find the flats – but any kind of
serious exploration of simulspace was something she wasn’t familiar with.
She sat in a chair with one leg
cross over the other. She had a few simulspace avatars, one of which was an
uplifted gorilla, but she preferred instead the purple and blue avatar that
looked closest to her in real life. She waited for a few seconds, and then she
was joined by someone else.
It was hazy, gray, and asexual.
Cameron: [Am… am I dead?]
Zira: [Sorta. Consider it something like limbo. We’re here for a
little question and answer session, Bucko.]
Cameron: [It’s just Buck.]
Zira: [Uh huh. In case you didn’t realize, you’re not in any
position to bargain. Now, tell me a little about yourself. First, are you a
fork?]
Cameron: [No.]
He started to scream.
Zira: [See, I forgot to tell you about that. Psychosurgery is a
wonderful tool for helping people excise unwanted parts of their personality,
develop new parts, and heal psychological scars as well as broken memories.
They also serve a rather less admirable purpose of being a tool for me getting
what I want out of you.]
Cameron: [I… I…]
Zira: [Try syllables and words. I’ll do this one more time – are
you a fork?]
Cameron: [Yes! Yes I am!]
Zira nodded, making mental notes
on an imaginary pad.
Zira: [Okay. Next question: who created you?]
Cameron: [Wouldn’t you lik…]
He was cut off by his own
screaming.
Zira: [Wrong answer.]
Cameron’s gray fork was
quivering. In the deep recesses of her mind, Zira knew that this wasn’t going
to get the answer that she was looking for. It never did. But she was hoping
that perhaps she could intimidate him into giving something else up. In the meantime,
she would continue her line of questioning, hoping that any signatures and
signals that might be given by the fork could be picked up by any of the
multitude of sensors that she had arrayed to detect them.
Cameron: [He did. Cameron did.]
There wasn’t a response. He
must’ve been telling the truth.
Zira: [So the ego that you belong too is named Cameron.]
Cameron: [Yes.]
Zira: [And is Cameron in New Hope Village?]
Cameron: [Yes.]
Zira: [Who else is there with him?]
Cameron: [Everyone.]
Zira frowned.
Zira: [And who is ‘everyone’?]
Cameron was hesitant.
Zira: [And who is ‘everyone’?]
He’d stubbed up. The scans were
revealing that this was a heavily pruned copy; she strongly suspected that this
was a delta fork. And if that was the case, then this interrogation session
would do much good. Delta forks could have their memories removed, and other
memories edited, so anything she got from him might be a lie. Part of her
didn’t want to continue the line of questioning, because she knew now this was
fruitless. Part of her did, because even fake names could be useful.
The part that did won out, but
her conscious managed to talk some sense into it. She caused Cameron’s fork to
black out, excised the memory of the previous questioning with help from her
Muse and the psychosurgery skillware, and then set about actually creating a
background for her simulspace domain.
She closed her eyes, and in a
split second, there was a beautiful garden surrounding them. Perhaps it was
time for a different approach. As she did so, she faded out and switched
avatars to one she made on the spot, recoloring her current avatar and
stripping it nude, with a bright light surrounding it. She made it bland; no
sexual characteristics at all, just a massive silver shape with flowing robes
that seemed to grow from the skin – the last thing she added was a halo and a
pair of wings made of light. Cameron’s ego took on some color as well; silver
and gold robes, with a face that resembled his own. He opened his eyes and
looked around the garden, and then up at Zira as she stood there.
Here was the new approach.
Zira (appearing as ‘God’): [Stand up,
Cameron.]
She extended her hand. Cameron
shielded his eyes, his hands quivering as he shook his head.
Cameron: [You… you’re not god.]
‘God’: [I am what I am. Stand up. I have
spoken.]
The red mesh text was there for
flavor, but it helped add emphasis: that and the fact that, as she spoke, the
words appeared in giant letters red letters behind her. She increased her size
almost 200x, until she towered well above him. Perhaps there was something to
this simulspace business after all.
With a wave of her hand, the
garden shuddered, and towering trees ripped from the surface, climbing into the
sky. A flight of jungle birds took to the air, vanishing in the distance.
It was very realistic. She could
smell the dew, and feel the warm caress of the sun. She could hear the hum of
the insects and the buzz of activity. It was so peaceful.
He looked up in shock.
Cameron: [I… I am dead.]
‘God’: [No, you are not. Your body may be defunct, but you’ve
served me will in life; your faith and your perseverance in the face of such
transhumanity travesties of My will has earned you an everlasting life beside My throne in Heaven; from here to the Millennial to beyond.]
Cameron’s fork started to cry.
It started to sob uncontrollably, and broke down into heaving sobs. Zira
kneeled down and shrunk back to normal size, put an arm around him, as he
looked up at her.
Cameron: [I… I didn’t know… I didn’t think that… I was hoping…]
‘God’: [Don’t hope, My child. You’re here
now. Welcome home.]
Cameron hugged her. She smiled
faintly – there were better ways than torture to get what she wanted.
Cameron: [I’m so… so happy]
‘God’: [I, however, have one to thing to
ask of you, My son.]
Cameron looked up at her, as he
stumbled to his feet.
Cameron: [What… what is it?]
‘God’: [Where is My Son? You were sent to
retrieve him before you were senselessly murdered.]
Cameron stared in blank
surprise.
Cameron: [Your son?]
‘God’: [Jesus Christ is My Son.]
Cameron sat down on a flower-covered
log.
Cameron: [We saved him. Those monsters would have killed him. We…
we lost so many during the Rapture… and when… and when you didn’t… he didn’t…]
‘God’: [Rest well, My son. You have done
well in life. Your goal of retrieving My son and taking him New Hope Village
where he could be saved will be the one thing that saves humanity from the
hideous monstrosities that they have become in My eyes. He will be saved, and
so will Humanity.]
Cameron: [He… he’ll be able to save people from a different world?]
Zira stopped. The next statement
would have to be worded very carefully to make this work, providing the fork
even knew at all.
‘God’: [Very; and from that forgotten
world, they will spread My message to the
universe. Thus, when I return, after the Tribulation has passed, I will have
all of My children with me to ascend to heaven. And the non-believers and sinners will burn in Hell for eternity.]
Cameron: [Forgotten world? Is that why they needed me to find the
Doctor?]
‘God’: [Verily.]
Cameron: [But… it’s just one world. And Tsion said that we’d only
be able to get through one gate at a time.]
World? Gate?
Pandora gate. Extrasolar colony.
Bingo. Bingo, bingo, bingo. She
felt a surge of excitement almost rip her out of her seat.
This was huge.
From here, it became a matter of
swallowing the excitement and working through to the end. It was a huge find.
One that made her tremble with excitement outside of simulspace.
‘God’: [And that is how I designed them –
but as I designed, I can change. Trust in Me, My child. You have done well in
life – now it is time for you to enjoy the fruits of your labor.]
She gestured out towards the
garden.
Cameron: [It’s… it’s all for me?]
‘God’: [All for you, my child. Soon, during my Millennial, it will be for those like you. You were right in your faith. Now enjoy the fruits of your effort.]
Cameron’s fork stumbled upright,
lit up in shock, and looked over at her. With a broad smile, he bolted into the
paradise jungle, vanishing as she watched. As the fork raced into the jungle,
smiling with tears streaming down his face, he began to slow down, and there
was a white light, and then everything went blank.
Zira sat in the room, her eyes
half closed. They’d – her and two others that she’d corralled into helping her –
ditched the dead flat and uploaded the mind into an ego bridge that they’d
attached to a mainframe ecto. Cameron was locked away
inside of the hard-drive of the ecto; trapped until it ran out of memory in the
simulspace heaven that Zira constructed. Or until someone accidentally deleted
the memory, whichever came first.
They were taking the Christ-bot
through the gates, and onto an extrasolar world. This meant they owned an
extra-solar colony somewhere in the galaxy, and that they must’ve been
brinkers. While Cameron had never outright said it, Zira was able to piece
together that the reason they selected that Christ-bot at that time was because
it had the gate coordinates necessary to open the gate and take them to that
extrasolar colony that…
She stopped.
This wasn’t making any sense.
She leaned back. This wasn’t
making any sense at all.
Why would they need a Christ-bot
that knew coordinates to an extrasolar colony they knew existed?
Maybe they lost the coordinates?
Why would a Christ-bot know
those coordinates anyway?
Is that why Dr.
Mahmoud-Martinique wanted that particular ego – because it had coordinates to
an extrasolar colony?
So many questions. So few
answers.
She hated how trite that sounded, but as she stood up and walked towards the shower, she found she couldn’t think of a better way to put it.
She hated how trite that sounded, but as she stood up and walked towards the shower, she found she couldn’t think of a better way to put it.
attempt to shake he
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shoving them aside as Zira followed
Remove the "as" and start a new sentence there instead.
the densely populate downtown
Populated.
if she4 could see them
Finger slipped and hit a number key?
She sat in a chair with one leg cross over the other.
"She sat in a chair, one of her legs crossed over the other."
(Needs a past tense, plus chairs have legs too.)
It was hazy, gray, and asexual.
Technically correct, but confusing in practice. Androgynous, perhaps?
the ego that you belong too
To.
interrogation session would do much good
Wouldn't.
her conscious managed to talk some sense
Conscience.
[You… you’re not god.]
He'd capitalise it.
giant letters red letters
Should only have the second "letters".
served me will in life
Served Me well.
such transhumanity travesties
Transhuman.
Cameron’s fork started to cry. It started to sob uncontrollably, and broke down into heaving sobs.
Both the "starting to" and the "sob" are repetitive.
[I’m so… so happy]
Missing a period.
taking him New Hope Village
Taking him to New Hope Village.
Very
Verily, I think.