tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2862170131521435894.post6332775255991692983..comments2023-11-02T07:39:02.009-07:00Comments on Post-Modern Enlightenment: Human Black Box: Devils Advocate (prt 1)Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2862170131521435894.post-62218201134910468852011-10-01T09:32:31.242-07:002011-10-01T09:32:31.242-07:00"You've stopped colour-coding the Mesh te..."You've stopped colour-coding the Mesh text? Too much trouble finding distinct colours for everyone?"<br /><br />Well, it's that and the fact that I've started typing them in a Word document before hand rather than in the text box when I go to make a post. This way, all I have to do is copy and paste them over. It takes about as much effort to color-coat them in word as it does in blogger, but I decided that more time needed to be spent in the story than matching the colors. A few people don't even read them with the color anyway, and with the name, it becomes that much extra work. The fact that I'm down to my normal amount of typos for a section of this size shows that I was right. :)Enigmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05365715172516356113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2862170131521435894.post-42527193814228490622011-09-30T19:13:37.917-07:002011-09-30T19:13:37.917-07:00Ooh, new Human Black Box. It's been a while.
...Ooh, new Human Black Box. It's been a while.<br /><br /><br />The big spaces for paragraph breaks are a bit much, but not that big a deal.<br /><br /><em>He’s sought help from the flesh-traders</em><br /><br />He'd.<br /><br /><em>The dark clad ghosts</em><br /><br />"Dark-clad" should be hyphenated.<br /><br /><em>thankfully this bad at least had those</em><br /><br />Body?<br /><br /><em>The nanotatoos on this body were different</em><br /><br />You spell "tattoo" without the double "t" a lot. Careful.<br /><br />You've stopped colour-coding the Mesh text? Too much trouble finding distinct colours for everyone?<br /><br /><em>They aren’t children bodies, Chloe.</em><br /><br />Children's.<br /><br /><em>It’d be night fall soon</em><br /><br />"Nightfall" is one word.<br /><br /><em>She was slander and beautiful</em><br /><br />*giggle*<br />(Slender.)<br /><br /><em>put her arms around Chloe’s waste</em><br /><br />Waist.<br /><br /><em>what I directed they give Zira the body she got.</em><br /><br />Why.<br /><br /><em>in the positions he was in</em><br /><br />"Position she". The space is in the wrong place.<br /><br /><em>"I wonder if I can find anymore.”</em><br /><br />Any more.<br /><br /><em>reputation in the black markets dealings</em><br /><br />Markets', I think.Brinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18034585577015417306noreply@blogger.com